September 2013 Critique Corner

September Stories!

Today is the day! I’ve posted four stories written by four brave writers! Each story sample is posted separately with its own comment box.  Just go to the post below this one to see Story # 1. Keep scrolling down to see each of the other stories after that. If your story is posted on the site, please be sure to make a comment about each of the other stories.  If you don’t have a story posted today, you can still make comments. I’m sure each of these writers would love to hear what you think!

Remember to keep the comments positive. Begin with something you like about the story, add a suggestion if you have one, and end with something else you like about it too! So scroll down, sit back, and enjoy the beginnings of these stories.  I think you’re in for a treat!

But before we do that, let’s hear it for our first four Swirl and Spark Authors: Mackenzie, Riley, David and Adam!!  **claps like a crazy!**   Thanks for submitting. You four are awesome and well on your way to writing amazing stories!  🙂

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