Today is the day! I’ve posted four stories written by four brave writers! Each story sample is posted separately with its own comment box. Just go to the post below this one to see Story # 1. Keep scrolling down to see each of the other stories after that. If your story is posted on… Continue reading September Stories!
Category: September 2013 Critique Corner
Story # 1
THE TRYOUTS By, Mackenzie N. Mekkena woke up to her tryout day. She was trying out for the Brockport screamers. She was felling scared and nerves because she was not sure if she was going to make it. She was not sure because for the tryouts you need to be able to do cartwheels, handstands, front… Continue reading Story # 1
Story #2
By, Riley “Cass!” I turn around to see Lea almost at the top of the cargo net. “Cass, can you get me down now?” She yells from fifty feet in the air. I sigh. This is the second time this week she’s gotten that far. She’s still reaching for the tire swing that is suspended three feet above… Continue reading Story #2
Story # 3
K.D.A.By, David V.Prologue I ran as fast as I could, faster than fast, trying not to look in the terrible gaze. I was all alone, no one with me and nothing with me, except a bow and one last arrow. I was losing the battle with death.Chapter 1 The Beginning … Continue reading Story # 3
Story # 4
The ChainBy, Adam Y.Detroit 2036- “McNabb skating down the ice up on a breakaway approaching the Blazers net, McNabb with the shot, he SCORESSS,” screamed the Rebels commentator. I always knew my special chain on my neck gave me supposedly “good luck” but I didn’t think it was enough to have me leading the Western Hockey… Continue reading Story # 4
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