October 2013 Critique Corner

October Stories!

You’re in for a treat today. 🙂 It’s story day… Let the critiquing begin! We have five story starts written by five awesome writers! Each story start is posted separately with its own comment box. Just go to the post below this one to see Story # 1. Keep scrolling down to see each of the other stories after that. Over the next few days, if your story is posted on the site, please be sure to make a comment about each of the other stories. And be on the lookout for a comment from Swirl and Spark too. If you don’t have a story posted today, you can still make comments. I’m sure each of these writers would love to hear what you think!

Remember to keep the critique comments positive. Begin with something you like about the story, add a suggestion if you have one, and end with something else you like about it too. So scroll down, sit back, and enjoy the beginnings of these stories. You’re definitely in for a treat!

But before we do that, let’s hear it for our October Swirl and Spark Authors: Adam, Jordan, Ben, Riley and Sarah!!  **claps like a crazy!**   Thanks for submitting. You five are awesome and well on your way to writing amazing stories!                         

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s